Comments on: Page 120

By: dray

dray — Thu, 04 Feb 2010 02:54:14 +0000

Pff, I don’t know if the page is ‘lacking’ anything like the folks above had said. It just looks like you had been using less gradients and more flat shapes as opposed to a more painterly technique. It probably just jars them to see that AND a lack of spoken words — those two in combination can make it seem like there’s a pretty big leap.

By: KatieD

KatieD — Sat, 30 Jan 2010 19:20:00 +0000

Love that exchange of glances between Adrianna and Galak and the end, with the raised eyebrow and the shrugged shoulders. So realistic – she looks around for a clue to what’s going on, doesn’t see any sympathetic faces, then latches on to the one guy she has some rapport with.

By: Kosake

Kosake — Sat, 30 Jan 2010 13:14:19 +0000

What he said….

By: Kyle

Kyle — Sat, 30 Jan 2010 00:38:44 +0000

I think what you’re getting at is that the colors have changed slightly; whereas the last few pages have been more shadowed and desaturated, the colors here are much more crisp and bright, as though there’s an extra flourescent light been turned on. I like it; yeah, it’s a little flatter than the other pages, but that feels more realistic to me for the cold, metal insides of an airship.

By: Mel

Mel — Fri, 29 Jan 2010 22:01:48 +0000

I agree – there is a ‘clinical’ or flat feeling to this page compared to previous. The first ~three panels are a close-up of the heroine’s face, and so deserved a more subtle build-up of highlights and shadows, or at least a softer gradation between the two values.

But what do I know. Someone else thinks those panels are “so damn awesome”.
fyi. the airship you hated drawing is so damn awesome.

By: Shin

Shin — Fri, 29 Jan 2010 20:19:42 +0000

Wonderful as always!

I look forward to more, and fyi I like your one year sketch >>

By: incendere

incendere — Fri, 29 Jan 2010 09:32:01 +0000

I love her face in profile – she has such a great nose.
Other than that… I stumbled across your webcomic recently, and I’m really looking forward to reading more. (It’s given me the kick I needed to pick up old sketches and try to actually get something on paper, so thank you!)

By: Kosake

Kosake — Fri, 29 Jan 2010 09:26:43 +0000

I’ll try… For one thing, Adriana’s face seems somehow different. Not the features but… I dont know… maybe the paint looks a bit non-organic somehow. Also, you made some better drawings of Galak than the one in the sixth picture. Frankly, I liked mondays scetch better.

Hum… Must be a pain to figure out, what I mean from that…. If you don’t see anything, just ignore it. I’m probably to tired to see straight myself right now.

By: Calaros

Calaros — Fri, 29 Jan 2010 09:10:36 +0000

Panels 1-3 are so damn awesome.

By: albone

albone — Fri, 29 Jan 2010 05:08:53 +0000

Wow, you really nailed that last panel. Love the smoke trail it left in it’s wake. Panel 6 is pretty fun, and the whole thing rules of awesome color.